charls story

HI my name Charles Im in the singing consist. the stage is huge and big bells  meany sets  downs and up stairs. we had to sing do ra me me and Benny get called first. But we dint know a single song. Mr R got angry  at us but then I said that I can sing pretty Polly. Im sing was terrible and it was squeaking. and then Mr R so mad he sent me and Benny out the class.

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  1. Anonymous12 May 2019 at 23:49

    Hi Jordan. I love your blog. You wrote it with your heart and soul, keep it up! Enjoy the rest of your day.

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  2. christopherc12 May 2019 at 23:55

    Hi Jordan.I liked your blog.It was nice to read and you put a lot of expression in it thank for letting me reading your bye.

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  3. Amyd13 May 2019 at 00:06

    Jordan, I like how you describe the hall, it gives the readers feeling of where you are. When I read over it the first time it didn't quite make sense to me, but on the second time it made sense, you were describing different parts of the hall. Your blog was little too short if you ask me, you tried to fit the whole story into a minimal amount of sentences. The only problem with that is me, as the reader, doesn't get the whole feel of the story. I would has liked a little more detail but the story still makes sense and is an amazing experience.

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